Dear Persia,
I read your comments regarding my 120-page plan for my philanthropic
project carefully. The great attention, care and detail you have
given to my work has profoundly touched me. You are a very
thoughtful, resourceful and a terrific editor.
Like the manuscript of my novel, "The Great Confrontation," which you
worked on last year, you have edited this plan of my project without altering my
voice and that is a great monument to your craft. You have indeed made a
difference in all the different editing projects I have collaborated with
you.
More importantly, I have learned to write well and improved my own
editing skills just by paying attention to your suggestions. From the
bottom of my heart, thank you for the work that you do for writers like
me.
are very thoughtful and instructive. Thank you very much.
are very thoughtful and instructive. Thank you very much.
My very best regards,
Dollie Darko
Dear Persia,
Thank you so much for the fantastic editing of my
essays. After heeding your suggestions and rewriting they read much better
now. I have no doubt that I will find a publisher for them soon. I
can't wait to sent them out to editors and write new ones for you to edit for
me.
Sincerely,